Senryu Tidal Waves Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Tidal Waves

Rating: 5.0


The tide touches shore
splashing upon sand castles
washing dreams away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 08 November 2013

Very true imagery. Beautiful senryu.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2013

Dream castles washed away by waves of time. Nice.

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Danny Draper 27 October 2013

Like the castle perhaps the dreams were ephemeral or just returned to the ocean of dreams.

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Wahab Abdul 27 October 2013

no less better than the earlier on ei commented... excellent image you created with your words like a painter.. excellent......10

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Sallam Yassin 27 October 2013

The reality of the life always takes some dreams from us from shores to the depth of oceans of life

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