Heather Burns

Senryu Tidal Waves - Poem by Heather Burns

The tide touches shore
splashing upon sand castles
washing dreams away.

Comments about Senryu Tidal Waves by Heather Burns

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (11/8/2013 9:17:00 AM)

    Very true imagery. Beautiful senryu. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/29/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    Dream castles washed away by waves of time. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (10/27/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    Like the castle perhaps the dreams were ephemeral or just returned to the ocean of dreams. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,076 Points Wahab Abdul (10/27/2013 2:30:00 PM)

    no less better than the earlier on ei commented... excellent image you created with your words like a painter.. excellent......10 (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (10/27/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    The reality of the life
    always takes
    some dreams from us
    from shores to the depth of oceans of life (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, October 28, 2013

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