Senryu- Thoughts Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Thoughts

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My mind, a reeling top
Thoughts, coagulated mass
Indivisible!

Thursday, January 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

You can read my mind :) This is exactly how I'am feeling and you voiced it.... Nothing less then 10 for peeping into my mind :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 January 2016

You have given a solid form to the thoughts that gather in the mind.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2016

My mind, coagulated mass, Love, melting it in aroma, felt but not seen!

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Bri Edwards 03 February 2016

i like it. bri :)

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2016

Awesome....Nicely written

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Mihaela Pirjol 11 June 2018

Another great imagery in this wonderful senryu. Essence compressed perfectly!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

Brilliant write in its simplicity. This poem resonates for me.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 March 2018

A lovely Haiku! I like the way you have tried to express your poetic mind! Loved reading it!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2017

Wonderful imaginary. Concise but meaningful. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2017

Thoughts of life; with the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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