Senryu Risky Business Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Risky Business

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Hearts are delicate
playing games on a heart string
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Thursday, October 3, 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 October 2013

So true, there is always someone ready to break someone's heart. A great poem.

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Neela Nath Das 03 October 2013

Really.A lovely poem on the risk of love.10++++

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Wahab Abdul 04 October 2013

who plays game on the string of heart is a risky business because heart is too delicate.....wonderful...love it..

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Harindhar Reddy 04 October 2013

simple but lucid writing ma'am! Highly impressed by yr style of expression!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 09 October 2013

there's 'wow factor' that is unexplainable in this short poem.

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Queeny Gona 07 October 2013

Message oriented exhortation! Lovely write dear mam

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 October 2013

Broken string's not easy to mend. Risky indeed. Beautiful poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 04 October 2013

Agreed. The message is crystal clear.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 04 October 2013

once broken then broken fore ever lovely Heather 10

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