Senryu - Plums Poem by Ben Gieske

Senryu - Plums

Rating: 2.7


teasing brother Kigo entry for Jan 2008
snow on her cheeks Shiki Monthly Kukai
plum red

little brother
coloring the plums
his sister’s eyes

at the party
under the mistletoe
plum lips

under the mistletoe
the tide climbs
each side of her face

clocking out Free Format entry for Jan 2008
commuting home Shiki Monthly Haiku
my face in the window

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