Senryu Deep Ocean Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Deep Ocean

Rating: 5.0


Lying peacefully

so beautiful and serene

the ocean is deep.


















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Monday, September 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 10 October 2013

So is this beautiful write with oceanic deep mastery. Loved it mam!

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Wahab Abdul 02 October 2013

whoever and whatever is deep and profound must be beautiful and serene..your senryu rocks, , , love it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2013

Still waters run deep. Applied to the ocean, the depth is increase. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Babatunde Aremu 01 October 2013

You made the ocean a beauty in this poem. Nice write

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 01 October 2013

felt oceanic depth in this beautiful senryu.

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