Senryu As They Float Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu As They Float

Rating: 4.3


The leaves in the trees

sigh, whisper your name as they

softly float away.

Thursday, October 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 24 October 2014

I think that the poem in just in three lines speaks a lot about the phenomenon of life and it floats away. A mystic poem may I think about it.

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Md Asadullah 24 October 2014

Deep meaning just in three lines, thanks for the share 10/10

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Tribhawan Kaul 24 October 2014

Wonderful senryu. Thanks for sharing

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