Senryu (5-7-5) 9 Poem by Aftab Alam

Senryu (5-7-5) 9

Rating: 4.5


Water flows, Rock in mound,
Yet, both are helping each other!
Below rock, water is found,

Monday, September 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Short and sweet write. very true said in few lines... Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 01 September 2014

awesome thought.....nice

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