Senryu(5-7-5) 3 Poem by Aftab Alam

Senryu(5-7-5) 3

Rating: 5.0


Black cat crossed the road,
'Evil Omen-abandoned and returned, '
Lo! Wolf pounced on Cat

Saturday, August 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

Quiet Interesting write. This left me wondered a bad omen for whom....Black cat or wolf? Well when bad omen crosses wolf. This omen will keep on crossing us. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 30 August 2014

A bad omen overtaken by still bigger an omen!

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