Senryu 5 Poem by Savita Tyagi
Senryu 5
(Revised 5 7 5)
war ills beyond cure
like bacteria it thrives
in our flesh and bone.
Senryu 5 (non traditional)
War is a disease beyond cure
Like a bacteria it thrives
In our flash and bone
FLESH and bone.............right? :) hee-hee i prefer the nontraditional one. we may never find an antibiotic for war. is it a method of population control devised by 'God'? ? it seems She could have come up with a better one. bri ;)
Thanks for all these comments and thank you so much for the correction.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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4/19/2024 11:19:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
War is a disease beyond cure Like a bacteria it thrives In our flash and bone., ......so touching and true. War is a disease that can't be cured. It ends in peace. Beautiful poem.