Senryu - 194 Fishing Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 194 Fishing

Rating: 5.0


my love a river
your love is a deep ocean
let's go for fishing

Thursday, September 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fishing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2016

Love is a river and let us go for fishing. What an amazing metaphor you have shared here really. Interesting sharing....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2016

Able to catch something. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 15 September 2016

Wonderful metaphor, Mohammed. A 10

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