Selfish But Learning Poem by Brittany Graviet
Selfish But Learning
Be patient....
I'm still learning.
Like a little child,
Still growing.
Hold still.....
I've come so far
But your fast pace,
Is too bizarre
Back up....
I'm trying to share.
Giving me to you,
I'm going to dare.
Just stay....
Sorry I'm like this
I'm so used,
To being selfish.
Don't give....
Anymore of yourself.
Now its my turn
To give you myself.
I'm yours...
I'm usually mine
But now I've decided,
To push that behind.
Together...
Now we can be.
I've given you myself,
100% and wholly
wow! fine composition! fine ending! small verse ecstatic! ........10+
This is a wonderful poem. I liked the way it flowed and it's contnuity. Great Job.
the message within the poem is quite strong, but there are places that you leave us hanging where it seems to be missing a syllable and doesn't read as smoothly as it could, either way it earns a 9 Timothy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 5:43:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A nice poem with lovely ending.