Seeing Beyond... Poem by Srita Sri

Seeing Beyond...

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Caught in a vicious circle,
In the circle of life
Like sands that dance to the tune of winds
Often we go, with the known

Caught in a vicious circle,
That brings mundane challenges at work, pains of love,
Expectations that kills, money that chases,
Dreams of future sacrificed for nothing

Caught in the vicious circle,
Spending each day without living
Ignoring the travel in search of destiny
Forgetting the very essence of living for the immaterial

Like immortals we live, like we have time forever
Missing the life as we grow,
Two things I notice as I sit here, by my window again
The beauty and wonders everywhere

On my left I see the serene beauty
Knowing what they are for,
On my right are the great human minds,
The perfect creation of the unknown!

What an inspiration to live,
To admire and to feel the true presence
Loving the one outside, worth an experience
There we are, not in the vicious circle again!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2008

a good poem this...keep writting, shrishti!

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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V F 21 May 2008

i liked this poem very much.. especially the way it ended.. great!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 May 2008

The beauty and wonders everywhere................but elusive.we have to do penance to get those.good poem

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Kristy Artmann 13 May 2008

I like your poem; it has a nice flow to it. ~Kristy~

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Raveendran . 13 May 2008

This poem speaks well of spirituality and spiritually guided love for existence

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Howard Johnson 13 May 2008

A deep emotionaly filled write.thank you for sharing, Shrishti

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