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Linda Farr (11/20/2008 9:37:00 PM)
This is such an interesting subject, if never to have had sight, all the senses would compensate, and I would think become more intuitive and receptive to feelings and vibrations. So the mind would have to work to decipher it all, thus heightening its sense also.....10 |
C T Heart (9/27/2008 9:37:00 PM)
You always penned with brilliance, sir. Disabled people are more sensitive to the plight of others..to his environment and more talented, for they cultivate and nurture their sleeping gifts to excel...a perfect composition. |
Palas Kumar Ray (9/12/2008 11:48:00 AM)
What a Blind can see is not seen by other who can feel the dawn and dusk in the world.Perhaps a blind man's vision can penetrate the heart tooooo.
Truth as such differently felt by them.Is that a blessing! ! ! ! !
So it becomes a very valid question whether a blind should pray to see like us.
Only I can say if he is blessed with the material sight he'll surely land into the unknown world where he'll feel it necessary to redefine the words like 'ugly' and ' beautiful'. we will surly have difference of opinion with him. |
Sarvesh Kulkarni (9/12/2008 12:29:00 AM)
This poem is amazingly conceived and thank you very much for posting it. |
, aryaindia (9/10/2008 8:21:00 PM)
The wall enables the writing, each eternally dependent to be known, but never known to the one who is proverbially blind, one who sees only the darker side of things, negatively, all knowing through heresay, he does not wish to acknowledge what is made available to him for he has the insight to see even beyond for he relies on his soul's judgement. Beautiful work which is thought provoking. Kesav, all 10. |
Rajaram Ramachandran (9/10/2008 11:12:00 AM)
How many in this material world can see things beyond certain level? It requires a broader vision and a spiritual outlook. You have touched this point in this poem well. |
Sandra Fowler (9/10/2008 6:06:00 AM)
Both brightness and darkness have significance when
seen through the eternal windowpanes of the soul.
A beautiful poem, Ten for you.
Always your friend,
Sandra |
Chitra Lele (9/10/2008 5:35:00 AM)
a mystical element in there...to go beyond and reach out to visions of the third eye.. a metaphysical effect there which definitely lets me read beyond the boundaries of any physical/non physical wall |
Sathyanarayana M V S (9/10/2008 4:51:00 AM)
A lovely piece. I agree with Peerbocus...this poem has all necessary elements of a great poem...10 |
Yoonoos Peerbocus (9/10/2008 1:27:00 AM)
thie piece is poetic enclosing all poetic assets....rhyme [wall/wall], , .repetition [proverbial/proverbial]...contrast [dawned/dusk]..stansaic coordination [writings/a blind/impedance etc]...interrogative end.....conclusion only frontal vision ..notspherical sight meaning circular not linear...lovely by kaleodoscopic dimension... |
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