Seas Of Lust (2011) Poem by David Joel Rodriguez

Seas Of Lust (2011)

Rating: 4.4


Still my eyes wander the moment when our sweat had clashed
Embracing our flaming drops devouring our unquenched love
An awe amazing precipitation, releasing endless sexual allure
Sensational swirls commence, tunneling the source of the whoa

Oh love...how these liquids surrender us to become attached
Fondling our palpating waves, encouraging our hidden rough

Licks commenced the expedition, furthering ignition of hunger
Undiscovered...as random digits attend estrous needs below
Steady stimulating moans achieved, awaiting to be splashed
Thundering chambers race, engorged and ready for the flow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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