# ' Searching Young Love' Poem by Daffodil Decarie
# ' Searching Young Love'
I found myself fetal in position
Second guessing where I belong
Whether I am in my womb -Or-
In your veins labyrinth.
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My heart tingles wide. Spread
At the chasm of brainstorming
The fiction -you- the picture.
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Young lips -ellipse sound- vowels foreplay
Young flesh writhes /ay/ soflty-
Gently /ooo-h/, eight embraces of two
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Before midnight forest
Slowly loses /aaahh-h/ to forever
Echo silken sighs hum! hum-
Hum, sighs laid bodies ballad
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The neck of young lovers.
The cotton wood. The dumbfounded
Eyes searching love rest.
Don... It's saying what it means: p about the 'haiku brevity'.. hmmm, are you talking about how the last stanza can stand alone? And to what it means.... for some reason, I was thinking of a man sitting on a bench, at the park, on sunday afternoon. This man is remisnescing how his last lover and him enjoy the sound of their voices, the faces of love, the feelingof peaceful love resting in your heart when you see young lovers passing by... the poem is trying to convey an asexual feeling of love. Thanks for the comment :) regards, Daf
Daffodil, this poem reads as a series of chapters or pictures, probably pictures. It has an almost Haiku brevity at back of it. I glimpse much of it and am intrigued - but I don't think I understand it properly. A powerful and different view none-the-less. Rgds, Ivan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 9:17:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I think this is the best understanding I have about this poem, that is it 'Someone's mystified thoughts about love's puzzling sensuality'