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Aijaz Asif (10/25/2008 4:31:00 AM)
why O why! i relate this poem to me cause it rsembles my feelings...it surely is a great write with depths hidden in those few beautiful lines and this poem ges in my fav. too thank you for sharing this wonderful work kesav...10+++++ |
Bob Blackwell (10/11/2008 7:58:00 AM)
Kesav, if we have learned from our mistakes, why look back, why not just be.....NOW. Brilliant write 10. Bob |
Cathleen Hodgkinson (9/17/2008 7:27:00 AM)
It's human nature to always want to know the answers to the unexplained in our life journeys when our paths lead us the wrong way...very thought provoking Kesav....-Cathy |
Amber Lamb (9/12/2008 2:25:00 AM)
There is nothing more realistic than the passing of time, if only there we could be assured that the passing of time would bring ease...a 10 |
Indira Babbellapati (9/8/2008 2:10:00 AM)
life itself is a search, easwaranji... |
, aryaindia (9/7/2008 1:17:00 AM)
Dead moments come alive just as live moments do not stay forever. This is the karma of life and living. It is natural that with the ability of thought, we go back in time to analyze our actions and words and dwell over what went wrong. We post mortem incidents which have faded well into nothingness and try to find clues to what surprises us most and what could have been...........a beautiful poem and very much to my liking..............arya |
Seema Chowdhury (9/6/2008 10:09:00 PM)
such a lovely and thought provoking poem. i loved the terms X & Y that you have used here. excellent and surely a 10. |
Abhimanyu Raman (9/6/2008 2:39:00 AM)
cool poem kesav, i really liked the way you portrayed the dilemma most of us face in life through this poem.
please read my poem 'the eternal search', both seems to speak in the same vein for me. |
Koyel Mitra (9/5/2008 3:17:00 AM)
Excellent life poem.A full 10. |
Omar Ali Sabar (9/4/2008 7:45:00 AM)
That's the story of my life... Reminds me of a Pink Floyd song called comfortably Numb |
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