Search That Never Ends... Poem by shilpa srinivas

Search That Never Ends...

Rating: 4.3


My heart searches you in every corner,
It reaches heights; it reaches low
It explore far and wide in the places unknown.
All it seeks is your eyes that shine, lips that smile.

It tears my soul, it digs my mind.
Just for a glance of the your face glow.
And for the warmth which is long gone.
I tell it you won't ever come back,
But its as stubborn as you that it never bows.

It searches in every crowd,
In every way.
Just in the hope you might be there.

Tuesday, April 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shilpa Srinivas 15 April 2014

Thanks khairul.. ill try to make it better

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Khairul Ahsan 15 April 2014

It's a nice poem. The first stanza is very appealing and beautiful, the third stanza is also good. The second stanza is flawed with some construction mistake, which I am sure, will disappear if you read second time and edit.

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