Sea And Sky Poem by sekharan pookkat

Sea And Sky

Rating: 5.0


Sea and the sky
live together
in sorrows
and pleasures
Go hand in hand
tied together
in our eye sight
But they conceal
their romance
in dawn and dusk
sea is nervous
when He sink
and blush her checks
in shyness
sky is is sad
when She is away
and agony makes him
furious in and out.

Sunday, June 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lovers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dramatic metaphors, naturally speaks the romantic mood and it's really soothing and mind blowing like to give 10 perfect thanks sir

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Beautiful thoughts. Felt like an evening stroll on the shores in pleasant breeze with a little sweet ache hidden somewhere in the bottom of the heart.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 July 2016

you truly said- love and harmony is a sweet ache hidden in the corner of heart

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2016

Sea and sky - wonderful metaphor for lovers- -Live together in sorrows and pleasures- Conceal their romance in dawn and dusk- - - Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

Live together! With peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sekharan Pookkat 26 June 2016

living in harmony though we are miles and miles away is a better thought

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