Screams
As I walk this land of broken dreams,
across the fields of a thousand screams.
Where streams of blood flow towards the river,
souls that past alone and quiver.
Filled with sadness and delusions.
no understanding, just confusion.
Waiting for the return of silence,
a thousand screams to be extinguished.
'As I walk this land of broken dreams, across the fields of a thousand screams. Where streams of blood flow towards the river, ' reminds me of walking on broken glass with bare feet, one of the worst memories from my childhood; but I loved this poem
Form: acrostic ................i have in my head that, in an acrostic poem, the first letters of each succeeding line spell out a word. time to do research, though i DID see one recently in which it was not the first letter. it might have been ever 4th letter from the start of each line. hmm? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - War Winning is the goal. All will not be happy, Resulting in unhappiness. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Search Results a·cros·tic əˈkrôstik, əˈkräs-/ noun noun: acrostic; plural noun: acrostics a poem, word puzzle, or other composition in which certain letters in each line form a word or words. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - [thanks, Google! ] let me take a closer look at this poem! :) sorry; i don't see it, whatever it is. souls that past alone and quiver.........if you mean (by past) dead, i suggest using passed instead. i think ..................................................when people use passed and expired instead of dead, they are being .........................................................squeamish***. but, hey, it works. not everybody is as cold as i am. : ( ***definition #1: [but look at #2 for a VERY DIFFERENT way to use 'squeamish' which i wouldn't have thought of] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - squeam·ish ˈskwēmiSH/ adjective adjective: squeamish #1 (of a person) easily made to feel sick, faint, or disgusted, especially by unpleasant images, such as the sight of blood. he was a bit squeamish at the sight of the giant needles synonyms: easily nauseated, nervous; put off by, not able to stand the sight of I'm too squeamish to gut fish ========================== #2 (of a person) having strong moral views; scrupulous. she was not squeamish about using her social influence in support of her son synonyms: scrupulous, principled, fastidious, particular, punctilious, honorable, upright, upstanding, high-minded, righteous, right-minded, moral, ethical less squeamish nations will sell them arms - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - well, these CERTAINLY are unsettling war memories which might invade a veteran's or civilian survivor's dreams, day or night ones. i like the rhyming. to MyPoemList bri :) P.S. i think Christopher, in the comment below, should not be saying war has no real purpose. that seems very naive! ! ! there are numerous purposes for a war to occur, not all thought noble of course. and the two sides may think in very different ways about the purposes.
The pain and loss one suffers in a war. it is just madness. But people don't understand and take the option. Liked it.10++++
Delusions! ! With the wickedness of war. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant poem, war causes so much suffering and death for no real purpose.