Schroedinger's Cat Poem by gershon hepner

Schroedinger's Cat

Rating: 5.0


I don’t know what gives matter mass
or what’s the cause of gravity.
On quarks and leptons I must pass,
a mystery, like McCavity,
for which there is no wording, a
poetic palimpsest whose text
is like the cat of Schrödinger,
one moment dead, alive the next.

With telescopes we try to see
beyond horizons of space-time,
but from its boundaries can’t free
ourselves with fantasies in rhyme.
Although light-years do not decree
the distances that we have charted,
we’ll never reach the jubilee
with logic from which we’ve departed.

Envoi:
Space-capsule irony alone
can capture meaning that resides
behind a logic that’s a throne
which has no front or back or sides.


Derived from this Vorlage:

I don’t know what gives matter mass
or what's the cause of gravity,
on quarks and leptons I must pass,
a mystery, like McCavity,
for which there is no wording, a
poetic palimpsest whose text
is like the cat of Schrödinger,
one moment dead but live the next.

(1/19/99,5/4/07,11/9/09)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cia Frizzell 02 May 2007

i read this to my cat (whose name is schroedinger, of course) ... it may or may not have approved...

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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007

Great from start to finish! Honest and powerful, especially toward the end. Great use of language and memorable! Top marks and I'll put this one in my favorite poems! -Michael

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gone gone 02 May 2007

Gershon Delightful poem...thanks! ! Love, D.

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