Scarlet Sails (( Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Scarlet Sails ((

Rating: 4.8


Sometimes we forget
Ours a guardian angel,
But the Keeper
Always with us

That it is opened
To you a door,
Necessarily should knock.

But self-assurances
Of a seagull
Without the invitation
Have arrived by the ship.

Honour to them liked
A vessel in opened
In the sea with Scarlet sails...

But I know
An angel the keeper
Will not mix my compass...

I wish to trust...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rema Prasanna 02 July 2008

A wonderful angel's soft protective hand I can feel in this work. Tsira you find such beautiful concepts to write accross It is a well scripted write and it deserves 10+ and more Rgs Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

'But self-assurances Of a seagull Without the invitation Have arrived by the ship' these assurances...and the trust that follows will keep the compass true in sail...10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 July 2008

An angel the keeper Will not mix my compass..................the confidence within carries us forward into the room of knocked up door and that is self assurance, wonderful thought by the imagery lapped up across the flow, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 05 July 2008

Will not miss my compass........very interesting poem

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David Desantis 07 July 2008

yes, a higher power watching out for us...i'm sure many find comfort in that thought, good one.

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Andrew Blakemore 03 February 2009

A beautiful poem and the title evokes so many wonderful pictures. Best wishes, Andrew

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Fiona Davidson 20 January 2009

Beautiful gentle words Tsira...Fi

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 November 2008

The scarlet sails of time will take you to the wonderland of your dreams and beyond.....A beautiful and talismanic poem filled with the blessings of self assurances, faith and determination. Really good one Tsira!

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Sandra Fowler 28 October 2008

Those scarlet sails have the power to take us beyond the sunset in a moment of time. Beautiful poem. Love, Sandra

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Jayaprakash Panicker 14 July 2008

the times we forget certain facts in our life are many when we have the faith that we won't lose the compus well things are bound to hold together. a good work. jaypeesukham@yahoo.com

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