Saturn And The Comet Poem by Vera Dike

Saturn And The Comet

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He saw her in the immense
nothingness of universe
Attracted by his theresness
She came closer

He erupted in unbearable sweetnes
and wore
The ring
as memory of the moment
they shared

She left
Maybe she was lil bit coquette
(moreover- as is every comet)
maybe she was too frail, too delicate
too scared
She simply left

Embodied light
There was something childlike
about her
(to his disgrace)
with hot lava, sttiring and boiling
under surface
In contrast with the aura
of cold

She left
Despite the fact
he is absolute king
he has power over everyone
and control about everything

Lion devouring his cubs
The patriarch
with his routine
and old fashioned manners
Numb

You can't avoid him
You can't cheat him
You can't escape him
no one ever shall

In the fact
she was afraid of the aging.
She left
destroying, burning
hurting,
roaring, raging.

In her fall
she was beautiful
and shone
brighter than ever.
Then suddenly
she was gone
forever

Thursday, May 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,stars
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vera Dike 25 May 2017

Thank You! I am glad You enjoyed :)

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Kayode Are 25 May 2017

Interesting switch from coquette to triumphant victim. Enjoyable.

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