Saturday Valentines Poem by Fay Slimm

Saturday Valentines

Rating: 5.0


Today is the 'flowers and hearts' day, no
Ordinary Saturday this, but a blissful
Anticipatory day, which can flow
From the soul of love. Valentine kisses
Are sweeter when sent with a well-meant thought
Of commitment to showing a lifetime
Devotion, a dated notion and brought
From the past, but needed to make love divine.
So when we say 'Please be mine' let no clock
Dictate until when. Be timeless in love
And love will succeed. Saturday shopping
For casual loving then ascends above
The norm, and this Valentine morning achieves
What lovers desire, a love in which to believe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 14 February 2009

A lot like the puppy saying Fay not just for Christmas and love is forever too super write 10 +++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 14 February 2009

Beautiful write Fay...says it all really....thank you...Fi...10+++

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Sid John Gardner. 14 February 2009

Marvellous write on a significant day Fay. Pity someone decided (and was allowed) to submit hundreds of items and block the system) Sid.xx.

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Alison Cassidy 14 February 2009

Timeless? Yes indeed. A light-hearted, optimistic expression of love everlasting. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Hey Fay, Happy Valentine to You! ! ! beautiful poetry as is expected..

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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