Satan Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Satan

Rating: 4.9


He swears an oath
To tell the truth
The whole truth
And
Nothing
But the truth
Then he tells
A truth
His last lie
Satan

(2008/7/15)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

very nice. i like it.

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Tsira Goge 15 July 2008

Short and original poems, Nightingale, 10.... Tsira

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Thad Wilk 15 July 2008

Ahh when Satan speaks his words you know are (all untrue) You can't believe a thing - he says to you! ! Splendid write! *10*! Friend Thad

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Truly said. May Allah bless us and save from that satan.10+++

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short...but you tell the truth......

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M M 16 July 2008

The faint limit between truth and lie is sometimes difficult to catch... A very nice write! 10

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Lynda Robson 16 July 2008

He was indeed in league with the devil, another profound write from you Nightingale,10 for this, Lynda xx

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Seema Chowdhury 15 July 2008

very nice and true.good job.

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