Sandy Onshore Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Sandy Onshore



heart seems to assimilate being in unison
sun when caresses earth to resonate
warmth dissipates all through space
gravity is law of attraction diffuses into unity

lust slowly redeems into room of consciousness
as untamed dream rues to ruffle at criss-cross
haste fails to uphold secrecy of sacredness
love rejoices to embraces earthly semblance

when joy to reverberate in vale of obsessiveness
ocean raves to weave blue from within to flow
we just stand to stare in midst of crest and trough
when tide to kiss by thirst of sandy onshore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 29 September 2012

Very, very curious verse construction, but I like it, will have to read several times to get true impact, . I think you are an unusual poet Dr. Kar

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

; ; we just stand to stare in midst of crest and trough when tide to kiss by thirst of sandy onshore; ; lovely lines

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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