Sand Sculpture Poem by indira babbellapati
Sand Sculpture
the ebb and tide for once
froze as your deft hands
dealt with the sand particles
to carve my sculpture by the shore
under that hazy star light
i was sprawled on the stretching sands
and in the reflection of
your warm dreamy eyes
saw myself laid royal by the mighty sea
and regaled at your artistry
and the beauty you found in me
high on my foolish vanity
i dared to dance on the tip of waves
forgetting that i’m but a piece
of carefully arranged sand particles
the sea with its inimitable roar
came in rolling urgency and
simply pulled me into its embrace
05sep2009
19.50hrs
You have a beautiful way with words and a fine command of metaphor.10/10 Kind wishes, Sandra
So good. Indira you have started probing the outer and inner circles of life so well. Wish to read more such poems from u.
the last three lines are the cap of the poem. i relished 10 marks
so Deep Imagination! these thoughts must be exteriorized indeed! ! ! thanks for sharing a sandy TEN!
Marvelous fusion of imagination and reality! Its a masterpiece. A sweet 10.
just simply a lovely poem... it's worth to ponder on... Nice work! ! ! ^-^
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 12:42:08 AM # 1.0.0.1119
the sea with its inimitable roar came in rolling urgency and simply pulled me into its embrace..lovely one i consider sea as your........and even if u were a sand scultures... powerful embrace from is real joy as agisn you hve merged with sea. poerfultheme with purpose... i loved it....10 read mine mary to mary......love at first sight