Sand Sample Poem by ion untaru

Sand Sample

Rating: 5.0


Every night I dream
that a mountain increased in my palm
that I raised on my shoulders,
and gone toward the Sargasso quiet Sea

then entered into line with other
nameless slave ships
to coast with high mountains
for a particular judgement

Huge waves went over us
that I could nor navigate,

(translated from romanian)
nor to come back
and water was changed abruptly in sand;

Our bodies were also from sand
heavy was burden, lower the power
On shore with deserted camps
that people abandoned in hurry

Like a guillotine behind clouds
of a part of the sky, up
When I woke of thrills
of the sand that I enclasp

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 November 2009

this one is really good. By the way, thanks for rating and commenting my poems.

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