Beach Girl


Sand in My Toes


Sand in my toes
Scorched burning feet
Ran to the water
Got outta the heat

White frothy waves
Crashed over my head
Began to feel naughty
Bandeau was soon shed

Fled to my beach towel
Was freezing to death
The cold blue Pacific
Does fill one with zest

Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 5,566 Points Mr. Nobody (3/8/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    I have no fear of shark attack,
    what I hate about the beach,
    is sand in my crack!

    Love your fast wit in beautiful brevity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Nika Mcguin (2/14/2014 3:00:00 AM)

    This is wonderful, it conveys the experience of being on the beach with both the highs and the lows. I haven't been to a beach in ages (we don't have much of that where I live) so this was like a vacation for me. ^^ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,063 Points Bri Edwards (9/4/2013 8:43:00 PM)

    thanks for the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i saw you, i think:

    She searched for her beach towel,
    her bandeau loose in her hand.
    With binoculars well-focused,
    I missed her toes coated with sand.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Marcus Mckinley (8/28/2013 10:31:00 AM)

    well it is 55-58 degrees year round in these waters. i am also a beach lover. lots of good surfin' here. nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Gleb Zavlanov (8/14/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    This is a very nice poem.It is very melodious and flows freely. I also liked the idea. Thanks for the write. Also, I invite you to read and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 583 Points Unwritten Soul (8/13/2013 9:15:00 PM)

    Nice work....Sand In My Toes....touch my feet so i can feel i am a part of nature, when the water from ocean call them i back to nothingness...just memories left..along the shore_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Sekharan Pookkat (8/11/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    white sugary sand
    pasted in snow coated toes
    sparkle in sunlight
    washed in white frothy waves - I like your style (Report) Reply

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