Sand In My Toes Poem by Beach Girl

This is a very nice poem.It is very melodious and flows freely. I also liked the idea. Thanks for the write. Also, I invite you to read and comment.

thanks for the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i saw you, i think: She searched for her beach towel, her bandeau loose in her hand. With binoculars well-focused, I missed her toes coated with sand. :)

This is wonderful, it conveys the experience of being on the beach with both the highs and the lows. I haven't been to a beach in ages (we don't have much of that where I live) so this was like a vacation for me. ^^

a good beach poem nice to have the sand between your toes 85433

Sweet. I love it too.

Love it. It's been a while since I was at the beach. This made me feel like I was there. Thanks.

Excellent melodious poem. I read this poem more & more. I enjoyed it. Great ink! Thank you so much dearest poet Beach Girl. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.

‘Tis true, ’ tis true, the pacific is cold. This does locate you, so now we know where that beach is. Read mine - Mother Dear - Adeline

a delectable kind of piece and pleasant lines

I have no fear of shark attack, what I hate about the beach, is sand in my crack! Love your fast wit in beautiful brevity