Salt On Watermelon Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Salt On Watermelon

Rating: 5.0


Salt on watermelon? That tastes great!
Salt on cantaloupe? Put it on my plate!
Salt on tomatoes? That tastes fine.
Salt on peaches? You can have mine.
Salt on mangos? Never tried that.
Salt on tuna? Feed it to the cat.
Salt on boiled egg? I like that as well.
Salt on ice cream? No way in

... Hades (and my apologies to the ladies) !

Salt On Watermelon
Thursday, December 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: food,humor,salt
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my other tastes in food, see my other poems called 'New Sandwich' and 'Oatmeal Omelet'.

Submitted 21 September 2014
Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil

Deleted and resubmitted with new title 25 December 2014 in order to get rid of the soundtrack added by PH
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 02 December 2017

Awesome! Fun, fun, fun.

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Bri Edwards 21 November 2015

the watermelon could be darker red and seedless, and the girl could be showing more skin. other than that, the photo is fine. :) :)

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Bri Edwards 22 August 2015

HEY, DIDN'T I LEAVE A COMMENT HERE ALREADY? ! is someone stealing my comments! ? ? love the photo. reminds me of my next wife! in my next life! ! i was starting to ponder an ending for your poem. then..... i noticed you had skipped a line and ended it yourself..... splendidly. to MyPoemList bri :)

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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