Salt On The Lips Poem by Aaron Lynn

Salt On The Lips

Rating: 5.0


As floating debris
Across the span of the vast
Within the primordial womb
Our throats, as a whole, would be open
But instead we are barred by this wound
Still some lone mouths are now gaping
Kissed by salt that was dropped on their lips
Shifting perspectives and purpose
Towards the dawn of perpetual eclipse

Monday, March 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: religion,spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 13 August 2015

Beautiful yet very vague, essence and meaning lie hidden behind your imagery. Enticing poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Hannington Mumo 16 March 2015

Good piece. Pen more!

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