Salt Is Sweet Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Salt Is Sweet

Rating: 5.0


Its dessert of salt
Rains mostly in night
And rarely in light
Has day and night
Color is black and white

Black resembles night
White resembles light
But its heart is black
So pours mostly in night
Whenever heart is tight

It pours all the night
Until heart sees light
Its rain is always salty
So it is very colorful
And makes life cheerful

It makes heart light
From night to light
With its salty rain
Its salt is very tasty
So drink it with heart

It makes heart strong
And makes life sweep
All past-reaped grief
With its flowing tears
Tears salt is sweet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 17 March 2009

I like it a lot theres something that draws me in, it's really sweet.

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Catrina Heart 17 March 2009

from the weep of the night there came a light to the heart, brought joys now the tears alike salt are sweet................... the essence of real happiness is being brought about after all the dark nights....10+++

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Eyan Desir 21 March 2009

Poetic as always great flow good work

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 March 2009

Playing around and repetition of words, beauty of tears and wonderful theme.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 March 2009

Interesting play with words.

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Pablo Cruise 18 March 2009

Your play with the rhyme is intriguing

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this poem is fantastic.. it get you, something again it.. i like it.

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