Sakura On Dying Twigs Poem by Unwritten Soul

Sakura On Dying Twigs

Rating: 5.0


How cold you feel inside
My whispers blows prayer to find you
Through the first fresh breeze of spring
You may see even died branches start to breathe
Soon buds will born
and flower will bloom

Breathe, awake now
Breathe even more
Be alive now
I'm calling you

How cold you feel inside
Day will come after first spring wind
When winter spell is broken
Frozen road turn to liquid
River will flowing free again

Breathe, awake now
Breathe more
Be alive now
I'm calling for you

No matter how do you feel now
Through this very first spring
I'll revive your heart
To full bloom
Like sakura revived on dying twigs

Do you hear me now
I'm calling you
Hear me calling
Through this spring breeze
Be alive now
I am calling you...

Do you hear me now?

Sakura On Dying Twigs
Tuesday, March 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational,rebirth,soul,spirit,spring
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First spring wind is for you to enliven flowers on dead wood, so the spirit in you..As to celebrate the return of spring, i just want to give a simple tribute of how nature and seasons can inspire us to be well living in soul and spirit...so i just started with idea of 'The very first of fresh spring breeze' and how it calling sakura to rebirth from 'dying' twigs and branches...as if we are renewing our chances to live for better time this time, let say second time, second chance... no matter how long it takes we will find best time to return as someone better, reclaimed all we havent have to be real..rebirth..it just a simple write that i hope everyone can find a joy in it...my heart is to heal not to bleed :) Thanks everyone who reading and supporting my work. It means a lot to me and its like fresh spring breeze whispers to me to keep me active in writing :) Thanks everyone. :) and Happy Nowruz to whoever celebrate it, wish the coming year will flower best than before...(that painted eggs were my art during nowruz festival, helping my friend for homedeco)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christopher Tye 21 March 2017

Wonderful poem, spring is always a time of renewal and fresh hope.

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Unwritten Soul 22 March 2017

And to reset all thoughts that bring us down to be in reversal mode... Thanks Chist :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2018

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Very cutely and astutely you have, dear Soul, inscribed on spring through winter which is enchanting and has deepest feeling. Spring as a person is calling....... Breathe, awake now........No matter how do you feel now Through this very first spring I'll revive your heart To full bloom Like sakura revived on dying twigs Fantastic expression. Happy Nowruz.10

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Susan Williams 20 May 2017

This poem is so incredibly lovely, Soul. And your Author Note very helpful in explaining sakura for readers like me who are not knowledgeable about the rich culture of other nations. Oh, these following verses whisper to the heart- - - see even died branches start to breathe - - How cold you feel inside Day will come after first spring wind When winter spell is broken Frozen road turn to liquid River will flowing free again..................................[this is incredibly poetic science being delivered here! ! ! ] - - Through this very first spring I'll revive your heart To full bloom Like sakura revived on dying twigs - - I am enchanted by your words and I hear you! ................. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Tom Billsborough 15 May 2017

Beautiful lyricism and imagery in the poem and great photo of the painted eggs. In the North West of England we paint eggs at Easter and roll them downhill. Your tradition is similar and is so well expressed. Well done, Unwritten Soul. This poem is going to be a real favourite of mine.

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Unwritten Soul 16 May 2017

Thank you for the beautiful words, i appreciate it :) . Well my dear friend Tom, its not my tradition it is my Iranian friend request to celebrate her new year with her family. She stayed here for years so i just try to make it well for them. Im glad you like this work...i wish nightingale can read for all of you how the poem should sounds hahahaha.

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Fabrizio Frosini 01 May 2017

cherry blossoms are one of the most beautiful expressions of Spring.. and here you've offered the readers a double ''reward'': through words and picture.. thanks

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Unwritten Soul 08 May 2017

Fabrizio, dear thanks for your reward too...a nice gesture of this humble poem :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 April 2017

The fresh beauty of Spring, and its symbolism, are harmoniously blending in this wonderful poem: almost like an hymn of divinity.

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Unwritten Soul 08 May 2017

Thank you Mihaela, thats kind of you to think and say this

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