Sailing Through Poem by Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Sailing Through

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We wait for splendid moments
So as to be ebullient.
We encapsulate ideal
Future to reach happiness.
External reality
Hardly fulfill happiness.
The wealthy style of living
Impair ability to enjoy.
Be your life a boat journey,
Where sailing through is a joy.
06.02.2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 07 February 2016

The wealthy style of living Impairs ability to enjoy. Be your life a boat journey Where sailing through is joy. Meaningful, realistic and thought provoking verse. The imagery and rhyme are excellent too. Thanks for sharing.10 points. Regards.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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