Sad Thoughts Poem by broken soul.. No more

Sad Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


sad thoughts
occupies my mind
filled with emptiness
loneliness
and self doubt
when will it stop?
will it ever end?

sad thoughts
kept tearing me inside
im now broken into pieces
with these visions in my mind
when will it stop?
will it ever end?

sad thoughts
stop hurting me now
its your memory
that haunts me every night
when will it stop?
will it ever end?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Matthews 25 October 2008

It sounds like to me that you lost someone you love alot. I can relate to it alot, it tells me you lost someone you loved alot, but if i learned from the past its better not to hold on to the ones you love the most gf friend mother father and so on learn from the mistakes and remember not to do it again...thats what ive been going by ever sense the one i loved the most left me for a druggie. i like it alot it inspirese me alot....keep up the good work

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