{ + Sad Old, Fat Old Man + } Poem by tiyler durden

{ + Sad Old, Fat Old Man + }

Rating: 3.5


I see a fat old guy.......
With a broken guitar.....
Wanting to be a star......
Yet not getting very far......, ! ! ! !
he sits alone.....
in my camper van......
Whishing he was 'The man'......
Bet you think this is porky pies.....! ! !
Or a bunch of lies.....
But take a little look at him......
sad old, fat old man.....! ! ! ! ! ! !
Who cannot sing....! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 05 October 2006

If you wrote it for your dad He would be ofended by it. Your dad could be old He may not know how to play the guitar Or He does? I am just quessin? You need to have respect for your Dad

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