(sad) -Haiku- Poem by ray Schreiber

(sad) -Haiku-

Rating: 2.6


ice on the windows
two speed freaks, a three year old
sleeping in the car

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vir Shah 26 December 2009

its a beautiful thought. But the title doesn't sound right. It rouses things better than sadness...a feeling of fear..a subconscious wish wanting that the uncertainties don't happen. :)

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ray Schreiber

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Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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