Sad Green Eyes Poem by Linda Ori

This reminds me of someone I love. Just what I needed to read tonight. Thank you.

A perfectly crafted poem, where the completely unforced rhyming structure increases the poignancy of the situation. Simply superb. xx jim

Linda, That was nice. Just sittin' here smilin ' ! B.V.A.

This poem hit home for me, very relatable very well worded, I feel you might enjoy some of my poems, try one I think you'll find it relatable

I notice how your lines flow beautifully into one another. This has clever rhyming that isn't merely there for rhymes sake. There is a clarity of emotion that I much appreaciate. Well done. Daniel Tyer

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" I'm drowning in those sad green eyes And the sorrow only grows; If I had one magic wish, You know what it would be? To see instead of sad green eyes Green eyes that smile for me...." Most beautiful part of the poem... loved it... the depth and the theme.. Thanks

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