Sad Girl: U Could Say Her Horrible Life! ! ! But Damn The World Aint Got No Pity! ! ! Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl
Sad Girl: U Could Say Her Horrible Life! ! ! But Damn The World Aint Got No Pity! ! !
Her life
Fatality a great weird to descibe it
Mental violence was breaking her down
I guess I could say
There were many people with condolence
But then again i would be lyin
No one there to bail her out of this one
She pushed it to her fullest! ! !
Him breakin her heart
Literally caused the poor girl heart problems
Her life was a failure
A waste
But not regretted
At least she dont need drugs no more
Her pain is over
But her happiness is soon to end
For she has not found out
What is soon to come
The carvings on her wrist
Showed how many times she tried it
But in the cemetery her half buried corpse
Show's the horribleness she's committed
Just a little clarification
Of the girl's life....................
my little girl, DON'T BE SAD...WHY? ....u shud be happy all the way...njoy ur life, ...for life s beautiful if u know how to live...be positive to urself...dont lost hope....WE ARE PRETTY, ...WE ARE LOVABLE...WE ARE GIFTED, always put that n ur mind..
Well I'm just 14 and do understand a heart break... but don't be this sad... we all go through this.. and the wisest thing to do is to learn from the expreince... you'll be ok.. life goes on.. and I know sometimes we feel it's too much that time would not erease but it will, little by little... aside form that is avery nicely written poem.. I like it a lot. Best Wishes, Ana Lia Zaldivar
Emily, there are wolves in lover's garb. You sing pathetically and expose their cruelity. A very appealing poetry. CP
Great work The story behind it, the words you chose......great! Scale 1-10..10!
the poem was really good. just some advice you might want to put a little more imagery in it, if you can, and if you can't i can help you. :) i would be delighted.. ~Hazel G.E
A great poem, The title said it all. the explanation was perfect
LOL amazing! ! ! ! ! ! I've never read a peom like this :) I love it :) 10+! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 2:26:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
wow... the peom definitly gives off an depressing feeling... but yet, if you look at it, and read it... it can be a truly understanding peom, and its calling for help, gives off a depressing feeling.. but its really well written...