S.O.S. Poem by Jamal Brown
S.O.S.
I'm dying on the inside.
Lost day to day.
Won't be too much longer,
Before I fly away.
It's so stressfull
It's been killing me
For a while.
When it bothers me I
just play it off with a smile.
Before I die
I want to say goodbye
I want say 'I love you'
To the ones in my life.
I want to kiss my family and my friends
One more time.
One more time, before I die.
(I'm not really dying as far as I know)
hey yes... I know this feeling.. and your poem says it all.. Hey you express yourself in a very nice, smooth refreshing manner indeed.. I like your emotions here... love shan
You definately know how i feel lol. I like how you put that little thing at the very end about you not really dying. It was funny lol Very nice poem though -Liz
nicely written i feel the same way 110% No Reason To Care
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4/24/2024 5:07:47 PM # 1.0.0.1119
lol the last line kinda killed the emotion... we know you're not really dying (or else you won't be posting this on a website) , you don't need to say it. But still a great poem and one that I can relate to. Keep writing! -Cheng