Run Away, Moon Poem by ijlal haider

Run Away, Moon

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i beg you,

just run away moon

they say,

they gonna landing soon....

the world lies

saying its second time

but i wonder

niel's arms so strong to climb,

height of light years,

ahhh.... to me,

still a mystery, it appears...

you've been part of mother's tales

coveted gift to beauty females

so pure so pious

gleaming the whole world,

unbiased...

payload equipped, propelled;

the robo man ready to dwell

its escape time, otherwise

you not gonna survive...

hey,

you no longer immune

its already june,

just run away moon....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neetha Sasidharan 09 May 2012

wow......really grt poem...grt idea...grt rhymes..... u hv incrediblr thoughts n imaginations.... mother's tales beauty of females- i liked those..... kp writing...

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isabella Francis 28 March 2012

Beautiful thought. Nice choice of words. I know that poems are not tied by the rules of grammar but please try to connect words more nicely in a flow.

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