Rukhsat (Urdu) Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

Rukhsat (Urdu)

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Jo umr bhar nahin soya wo so nahin sakta.
Ke khushk chashm dam e marg ro nahin sakta.

Rukhsat (Urdu)
Friday, September 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,friendship,welcome
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Recited at the farewell of zahoor ahmad abid ss (poet) , mr.hanif sr headmaster and reception of mr. akhtar s.s.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Konab Ghumman 08 March 2019

Well written short and definitive like to see more

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Thank you so much, Konab G, for your words.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 March 2019

bahut wadia! ba kamaal! ati sunder! sundram! beautiful!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 March 2019

Bahut shukria, Jagdish Singh gi.

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Vashita Moondra Sarda 09 April 2018

applaudable. :) ......

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 April 2018

Thank you so much, Vashita, for it.

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Rameeza Nasim 20 January 2018

Beautiful Gazal! expressing love and bittersweet feelings of farewell.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2018

Many thanks, Rameeza, for the insightful comments.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2017

Revisiting to this poem. It is a beautiful poem on farewell and friendship having touching expression. So nahin sakta.. . ro nahin sakta. Interesting. Thanks.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 October 2017

A nice revisit of a great poet with fine comments indeed. Thanks sir.

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