Rotten World Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Rotten World

Rating: 3.9


Rotten,
all i see is black,
it only further provokes my distaste for everything,
savages,
eat eachother alive, leaving poor souls lost in the black wasteland
they are now blinded by darkness,
darkness so deep, it devours the light
it is a disease cloud devouring those lost souls into oblivion
all they need is to see light
just a little, enough for them not to give up hope
these precious souls,
once innocent and vibrant
extinguished by the savages
Savages!
they deserve to live in darkness,
not those poor lost ones, who stood no fighting chance
but as one of those souls, i too have no light
i cannot help them
shame....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Blake 02 April 2007

i love the poema nd i'm glad i found my ray of light. Great work

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Aldo Kraas 30 March 2007

This poem is excelent

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Madly In Love 30 March 2007

I like this poem alot good write

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