Roses Poem by Kwai Chee Low

Roses

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I dream of roses
By a lake of cool splendour
Soft grass as my bed

Whistling in my dream
Pretty maiden do I meet
Cheeks of soft roses

Thursday, October 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 04 April 2016

What a beautiful dream! May it come true. Your poem is formed with two pieces of Haiku. A beautiufl write, loved it.

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Kwai Chee Low 05 April 2016

Thank you, Cigeng. It's in the traditional 5-7-5 haiku and one of my earlier work. Glad you enjoyed it!

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