Roots In The Woods Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Roots In The Woods

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When I was your dream
In piercing sun rays that had
Eaten up shadows
Folding back on the surface of earth
That looked like a silver plate
Reflecting so to the depth of skies
Infinity had given color blue
The lazy clouds in bright white
Nests of birds on some trees
The first ray of spring had touched
Hidden heart of the bud of flower
The thin legs like they break
Antelope's dismay naught eyes wide
The cave was a visit to mystery
Spooky dark by the smoke
Some saint might of longing
Sick of the world in isolation
Fancy was the rite of love
When the dead lived up the hill
To recreate life resurrect
I drink from your lips the elixir
I grow like roots in the woods

16/1/2010
Islamabad

Friday, January 15, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 28 January 2010

Beautiful poem. You are an excellent wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra

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Reshma Ramesh 27 January 2010

agrees with kesav sir.........beautiful....sadiq

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Anjali Sinha 19 January 2010

If only dreams were made of this Of happiness and bliss In sunlit rays and wintry nights When lazy clouds and cold breezes blights Sweet scents of spring, the bells did ring And birds on every wing Sing of praises, one and all No sorrows or ills to fall No hunger and disease exposes No guns but only roses Then, the elixir drunk from your lips would Have grown like roots in the woods yours is lovely as always -10 anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 16 January 2010

You are a good imaginative poet Sadiq...'the pressure of eloquence' in your poems is directly proportional to 'the romantic temperature' in you! Thanks for this pleasing write...10

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