Rollercoaster..X Poem by Franchesca Onken

Rollercoaster..X

Rating: 5.0


Heart racing
Lips shaking
Feet bouncing
Stomach churnning
Goosebumps travel up my arms
Shivers run down my spine
Heart is pounding, beating fast
In a moment this will be a thing of the past.

Sweaty palms pull down bar, click in strap.
Breathe in slowly... let it out.
In throught the nose out through the mouth.
My legs shake like jelly.
I look ahead of me, a naked track, a runway, waiting for me.
Thrills overtake me...
This is going to be heart-stopping.

I hear a countdown begin...
5
4
3
2
...
Whooooooooooshh, into the sky
Watch me fly
On the rollercoaster.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 15 March 2009

Great end rhymes in your few verses, plus the sound effect...your onomatopoeia device here in this vivid piece made your poem more alive...........10

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