Robbery Poem by Tom Allport

Those first two lines are a tutorial in how to write an opening that is guaranteed to keep the reader reading [or flying to the nearest safe room].. How to write a frightening piece in a succinct and powerful way. I think I will go take a sedative now... ;)

The reading of this sends shivers down my spine, which is happening a little to often thses days. nicely written. Annette

Very well written...one is left holding your breath.