River Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Yoonoos, I love the imaginative phrases in this poem. Not simply writing the expected but the unexpected and furthering depth in your poesy. A wonderful piece. Thanks so much for sharing, Greetings, Paul

Very deep, excuse the choice of words. it is a very emotive topic, and I think you have captured that sense in the imagery used :)

Journey of a river has always been a phusical, philosophical and socio-cultural life-line for human settlements across lands and ages. Beautifully portrayed. Thanks a lot for an amazing work. culture-cross, a model summit for man's world dream to become harmonious with all difference.

Painting of a river with words.

a collage of thought....nice

Flow through the river is a part of Water Cycle.... Nicely depicted the fact.... Thank you for sharing with us.

A poem of great depth so beautifully written. I concur to the wonderful comments of the great Poet Akhtar Jawad. Onto my Poem List.

Beautiful poem, dear poet

excellent writings Sir- ferries in freight of foreign dust which is not the me such as I am now.the stream cannot migrate me across years to my source

The cycle of a river is just like the cycle of life. Clouds rise from the seas and rain, giving water to rivers and fall back in the seas to rise again as clouds. The question arises whether we shall get another life like the clouds? Who knows? So let us be peaceful in our beliefs.