Ritual- Ization Poem by Kikee Doma Bhutia

Ritual- Ization

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Oh yes! Let's pray together,
To almighty God,
For prosperity, for peace and happiness
Let's pray to God for taking away all the bad omen
Thank god for all the miracles in life
But let's not forget one thing
God should hear our prayers
See our devotion and
Feel it through all the senses
And to do that we need to make a tent
Play the loudest music we can
Doesn't matter its a Bollywood number
God should hear it in heaven
Let the 'menka' and other angels dance
Whole locality should know that we are praying
That we are celebrating the happiness for god
Should bring some booze and dancers
Let the God see what we can do,
With what he had given us
Thus how we should do our ritual
And celebrate our love and purity for God
With the showcase and the drums
Will celebrate all the festivals! !

Kikeyla Doma KaleonPa

Wednesday, September 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: identity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 07 October 2015

A lovely devotional piece of poetry, nicely penned with spiritual insight. A well articulated poem depicting total submission to The Will Of God. Thanks for sharing Kikila and do remain blessed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 23 September 2015

''With the showcase and the drums Will celebrate all the festivals! '' very good write, Kikila WELCOME AT POEM HUNTER and.. keep posting

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Kelly Kurt 23 September 2015

A wonderfully written poem, Kikila. Thanks for sharing.

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