Rise Of The Crow Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Rise Of The Crow

Rating: 4.7


If I should die
would I lie
or would I rise

Rise from the ashes
into the form of the Crow

To still see
into the hearts
of the ones I love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angela Wybrow 27 November 2011

I really like this! Very moving!

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T. R. Crissian 27 November 2011

Though a short poem, it is a nice write.

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Eric Cockrell 26 November 2011

you will rise like smoke from the ashes, hanging in their hearts, as solace! short, powerful poem!

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death can always bring some source of happiness to a person, thats my personally opinion good job :)

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Unwritten Soul 26 November 2011

OH this is the best shot in short, you create a big impact only in small words.. :) I hope one day the crow will rise instead of dying..and the color of the feather evolved to be many as it gained from lessons when the crow was about dying...I love the line 'Rise from the ashes.....into the form of the crow'..no no i guess every line just made well..i cant pick one but whole hahahaha...Very Nice My Bro Dave! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Rahman Henry 05 September 2015

Lovely poem. I like it, so much.

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Kelsi Brockway 22 February 2012

Another awesome poem. Great JOB! ! !

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Minnie Gehrig 03 January 2012

Thank You for sharing... i like it very much!

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Sajna Kailas 03 December 2011

wow, very powerful idea, short poem with complex thought.Yes.it is very nice.best wishes! ! ! !

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Craig Anderson 01 December 2011

Strong in fact very strong. Read a few times to get the full impact. Excellent write Dave. Regards. Craig

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