Riptide Poem by Stevie Taite

Riptide

Rating: 4.9


The layers of comment
fall on top
Like in the making of
sedimentary rock
And fossilised
amongst opinions
are thanks for support
In this dominion

The layers of words
whether many or few
Will recycle our eyes
to Poets new
So we can deposit
some thought of ours
Big apologies if it takes
more than hours

Hey where are the poems
in this analogy
They are the beautiful
deep blue Sea
That laps and swirls
with riptides of emotions
We take pleasure in swimming
in the poetic ocean!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A fun analogy to turn into a poem of appreciation for all who show their souls and share their ideas and inspirations through their poetry on this site.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 16 February 2013

Oh, how we all love to be loved! LOL

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Owain Glyn 16 February 2013

Oh, how we all love to be loved! LOL

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Valerie Dohren 31 January 2013

A lovely poem Stevie, a nice thought with which I fully concur.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 January 2013

Thanks for the appreciation for all our fellow poets through this magnificent - Riptide.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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